Have you ever made butter before? Well today class 8’s literacy class has been learning how to make butter. All you need is a bottle of cream, salt and some fresh bread.
How we made. When you are making your own butter at school, all you need is a bottle full of cream, salt and some fresh bread.
I think you make it clear what you are writing about, Your introduction deserves a 3 at least for orientation. Good on you for trying a question as a hook.
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